i cant stop thinking this is a copy of piemations animation....like its almost spooky how similar they are.. until i noticed your jokes which was..well kinda flat
but your animation was good characters are alright voices.. decent details alright ...
and i am not trying to be a jerk ! i just find it pretty fun that your animation was about the same concept and almost the same story XD
The animation is.. fine could need some more work.. the voices..err...well..alright but nothing 2 fancy clean audio so thats a +
is it my cup of tea !? well...not exactly but for a quick animation its fine
but oh lordy the editing is indeed abit abrupt but as OP said its an old project so.. i dunno could use a softer transition in the end
but as a quick project its alright
supah great =D
this is just the funniest and sickest shit i ever seen :P great job !!
This is a very well made game !. the story is interesting and the scenes are good But i miss different ways to finish THAT would be awesome =)
and the puzzles are good not great but good
its nice to see that you actually need some effort to complete them
it needs abit more H-scenes and some more choices when the good stuff is about to go down ;D
other then that its great
the game works fine and i completed it with 22 days
Fun game and a good timewaster ^^
very nice done with the design i coudnt make something like this with the experience i have now but maby someday i will But in the mean time i will give you some nice critice
First the head looks nice detailed and all that But i have found some flaws in here i think you should take a closer look at the chest piece looks kind of uneven in the rib section and ithink the mouth thing looks kind of out of place with the pipe thing coming from his chest thing
and you should consider too work abit more on the details and just put a little little more work on seeing how the whole "thing" comes together as an whole and then perhaps work on how to do shapes and forms alike on each side.. other than that really love the colors it fits it good and perhaps some shadow on some parts would make it pop more and some darker colors on the light red part to get that dark feel to it well thats my revive
hope youwill continue your work and keep practicing and keep on painting your art cuse they are really good but they could look better if you work on some things like shading, colors and some ligtning efects would be cool too
well great work too you i lift my hat and say godbye and thank you for a nice piece of art here on newgrounds =)
Thank you for taking the time to give me a critique! it will help me improve!
Also, i should have used the image frame to symmetrize instead of drawing both sides, so nothing would be uneven. Also that would have saved me lots of time. Sometimes i dont even realize some mistakes until i see the image again long time after i finish it. I guess that happens when you spend much time in the same piece.
Well jeez this is nice the details on the pants is nice :D
now a thing i want to point out is the armpits they are a bit to bright and the gun is a bit off where the trigger should be XD and perhaps a bit mor shading in the belly button
Nice piece of art you got there =) wish i was this good XD
Whoa this is a good picture for a 3d its pretty good =)thou some details is a bit off with the supports between the towers thers a little something that looks like flying scrap or wines i really cant tell but other than that its really Awesome with the right colors for the concrete and the riples on the water is a nice addition too good job :D
PS. I dunno if its intentional but one of the towers on the part closest to the city is crooked i dunno if it intensional but it should maby be crooked a bit higher and perhaps a little less against the bottom other than that its really nice
Thank you! It's a school project, and we have to show it tomorow, can't wait for the respons!
Can't figure where you're seeing the "flying scrap/wines" - Can you please specify, so I can see it? :D (I'm totally blind when I'm looking at my work, after 2 weeks xD)
It's intentional, but i can see your point - I actually wanted it to be that way, but.. It didn't went well (I hate "smashing" my stuff in 3D, so I have been too soft with the models!) :P
But thanks for the feedback! :D
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