silverflame's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Zabrak Droid]

very nice done with the design i coudnt make something like this with the experience i have now but maby someday i will But in the mean time i will give you some nice critice

First the head looks nice detailed and all that But i have found some flaws in here i think you should take a closer look at the chest piece looks kind of uneven in the rib section and ithink the mouth thing looks kind of out of place with the pipe thing coming from his chest thing

and you should consider too work abit more on the details and just put a little little more work on seeing how the whole "thing" comes together as an whole and then perhaps work on how to do shapes and forms alike on each side.. other than that really love the colors it fits it good and perhaps some shadow on some parts would make it pop more and some darker colors on the light red part to get that dark feel to it well thats my revive

hope youwill continue your work and keep practicing and keep on painting your art cuse they are really good but they could look better if you work on some things like shading, colors and some ligtning efects would be cool too

well great work too you i lift my hat and say godbye and thank you for a nice piece of art here on newgrounds =)

Nempatriarch responds:

Thank you for taking the time to give me a critique! it will help me improve!
Also, i should have used the image frame to symmetrize instead of drawing both sides, so nothing would be uneven. Also that would have saved me lots of time. Sometimes i dont even realize some mistakes until i see the image again long time after i finish it. I guess that happens when you spend much time in the same piece.

[London Tower Bridge]

Whoa this is a good picture for a 3d its pretty good =)thou some details is a bit off with the supports between the towers thers a little something that looks like flying scrap or wines i really cant tell but other than that its really Awesome with the right colors for the concrete and the riples on the water is a nice addition too good job :D

PS. I dunno if its intentional but one of the towers on the part closest to the city is crooked i dunno if it intensional but it should maby be crooked a bit higher and perhaps a little less against the bottom other than that its really nice

KayaKure responds:

Thank you! It's a school project, and we have to show it tomorow, can't wait for the respons!

Can't figure where you're seeing the "flying scrap/wines" - Can you please specify, so I can see it? :D (I'm totally blind when I'm looking at my work, after 2 weeks xD)

It's intentional, but i can see your point - I actually wanted it to be that way, but.. It didn't went well (I hate "smashing" my stuff in 3D, so I have been too soft with the models!) :P

But thanks for the feedback! :D